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I just wanted to tell you that I never meant what I said I never thought
That you were gonna be upset
Now I m regretting it
Now I get the meaning of the bitterness after those sweet times with you
I know that I can't get rid of it by candies because you are the only sweets that I need
I can't stop thinking of you
Sadness and darkness took over my heart
And my heart can't stop crying and bleeding while longing for you
I wish that my feelings can reach you
The feelings of someone who is agonizing
And calling for you.
okay so this is my 1st time writing something like that XD
it was for a project~~
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ZilonD Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
it was good :), does it mean anything to you or was it just pretty words?
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bloodcofee Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2012
thank you ^^
well of course it means something otherwise i wouldn't know the feelings
that i wrote about^^
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ZilonD Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
You got a point but there is a LOT of people that wrights about feelings for the sake of it. Theyre usualy not very good but sometimes even weeds have Pretty flowers. But i consider them fake. Its much more beautiful when you know that the love and pain is sincere. Thats why I asked... easier to read and feel the weight of the words
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bloodcofee Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2012
lol yeah i agree but i also think that when you read something wrote with feelings you can feel it i don't know you get some kind of sensation (sorry i don't know how to explain) but when you read something that's just pretty words you don't feel anything the same goes for music (that's what i think)
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ZilonD Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
You dont need to put moore words in too it I now what you mean and i feel you, I didnt mean to affend you I think it was very good... I consider myself pretty intelligent but I recently got fool myself by pretty words so I guess Im just careful... But I asure you I did not mean it in any condesending way ( did I use that word right?)
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bloodcofee Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2012
haha i m not offended ^^
and thank you :)
ah i see :)
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